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My Uncle |
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He's kind, he tells stories when he was young and he lets me play on hes phone |
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Hes make yummy scramble egg |
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My uncle is special because when i'm sad he makes me Happy . he gives me his phone when i ask him and when He's gone to work i'm sad because i miss him |
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My uncle has fluffy black hair and i think hes 1m and a ½ and hes good at cricket |
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My uncle is the best cricket player and he should join the black caps Hes make yummy scramble egg My uncle is special because when i'm sad he makes me Happy . he gives me his phone when i ask him and when He's gone to work i'm sad because i miss him My uncle has fluffy black hair and i think hes 1m and a ½ and hes good at cricket My uncle is the best cricket player and he should join the black caps |
Hi son it is great to see you blogging. You have included a lot of information about your uncle in your planning and I like the way you have summarised your writing. What does is your uncle good at? I heard he is a good fisherman. Is that true? Keep blogging and happy learning.
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