my favourite person

 

Plan

Who is a member of your whanau that is special to you?

My Uncle

Brainstorm some ideas - 3 minutes

He's kind, he tells stories when he was young and he lets me play on hes phone

Draft

Introduction - 1 sentence statement

Hes make yummy scramble egg

Why are they special to you? - 1 paragraph

My uncle is special because when i'm sad he makes me Happy .  he gives me his phone when i ask him and when He's gone to work i'm sad because i miss him

Describe them - 1 paragraph

My uncle has fluffy black hair and i think hes 1m and a ½ and hes good at cricket

Conclusion - 1 sentence statement

My uncle is the best cricket player and he should join the black caps Hes make yummy scramble egg My uncle is special because when i'm sad he makes me Happy .  he gives me his phone when i ask him and when He's gone to work i'm sad because i miss him My uncle has fluffy black hair and i think hes 1m and a ½ and hes good at cricket My uncle is the best cricket player and he should join the black caps