Wow, those are some amazing summer sounds! I love the chirping birds and rustling leaves! Your poem matches this perfectly and is so descriptive! I particularly like the ending because your house seems so peaceful and relaxing! I also really like that you put emotions into your poem too like feeling free.
What other sounds can you hear? People laughing, cars driving?
I really want to hear you read your poem, but unfortunately I don’t have access. Are you able to make it public? Let me know in the comments when you’ve done so so I can see!
Kia ora Reece,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey!
Wow, those are some amazing summer sounds! I love the chirping birds and rustling leaves! Your poem matches this perfectly and is so descriptive! I particularly like the ending because your house seems so peaceful and relaxing! I also really like that you put emotions into your poem too like feeling free.
What other sounds can you hear? People laughing, cars driving?
I really want to hear you read your poem, but unfortunately I don’t have access. Are you able to make it public? Let me know in the comments when you’ve done so so I can see!
Keep up the incredible work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Kia ora Reece,
DeleteUnfortunately I still can't access it :( can you make it accessible if you have the link, and share the link please.
Thanks,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Reece,
DeleteIt's working! I was super excited to hear you read it! You spoke so clearly and I love your poem! You're awesome, ka pai!
If you could write a poem about anything else, what would you write about?
Bye for now,
Shannon (SLJ)