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Wednesday 6 January 2021

SLJ Week 4 Tuesday

This is my summer sounds activity. It was a fun activity to do in my backyard. 
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  1. Shannon at the SLJ Team7 January 2021 at 08:56

    Kia ora Reece,

    It’s Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey!

    Wow, those are some amazing summer sounds! I love the chirping birds and rustling leaves! Your poem matches this perfectly and is so descriptive! I particularly like the ending because your house seems so peaceful and relaxing! I also really like that you put emotions into your poem too like feeling free.

    What other sounds can you hear? People laughing, cars driving?

    I really want to hear you read your poem, but unfortunately I don’t have access. Are you able to make it public? Let me know in the comments when you’ve done so so I can see!

    Keep up the incredible work!

    Ka kite anō,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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    1. Reece7 January 2021 at 13:27

      Hi Shannon it is done now. Thank you for your comment.

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    2. Shannon at the SLJ Team12 January 2021 at 17:49

      Kia ora Reece,

      Unfortunately I still can't access it :( can you make it accessible if you have the link, and share the link please.

      Thanks,
      Shannon (SLJ)

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    3. Reece13 January 2021 at 12:24

      Hi Shannon I think it is working now. Thank you.

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    4. Shannon at the SLJ Team14 January 2021 at 20:17

      Hi Reece,

      It's working! I was super excited to hear you read it! You spoke so clearly and I love your poem! You're awesome, ka pai!

      If you could write a poem about anything else, what would you write about?

      Bye for now,
      Shannon (SLJ)

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