My name is Shannon and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Wow, you’ve done tremendously well! I’m so impressed not only by your comment but that you screencastified it and read it to your audience.
The comic itself is very funny, hopefully the man isn’t too sea sick! I can’t say if I found teeth in the ocean that I’d put them in myself. Would you?
Your voiceover was also awesome! You’re a great public speaker, and I like the expression you used for each character. Ka pai!
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Kia Ora Reece,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Wow, you’ve done tremendously well! I’m so impressed not only by your comment but that you screencastified it and read it to your audience.
The comic itself is very funny, hopefully the man isn’t too sea sick! I can’t say if I found teeth in the ocean that I’d put them in myself. Would you?
Your voiceover was also awesome! You’re a great public speaker, and I like the expression you used for each character. Ka pai!
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Keep up the great work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Hi Reece,
DeleteThose are cool topics to write about! What happens when you go camping with your family?
I can't imagine being lost at sea. It would be so scary! WOuld you be brave or a little scared?
Bye for now,
Shannon (SLJ)